M2 Axonometric

Some thoughts on this work and presentation:

  • fun and enjoyment always come through in the work, try to have fun!
  • thoughtful graphic layout, use of grouping, fonts, white/negative space
  • excellent research, it is a great idea to research design or artistic precedents
  • good organization of thinking and use of graphic thinking for idea development, visual thinking is particularly powerful for complex compositions, human brain cannot remember all these structures without aids. completely agree on the importance of sketching as a persistent habit, for all forms of design, as a way to gradually develop skills and collect ideas for future use
  • good use of colour to group elements visually and suggest meaning
  • good use of texture and small elements to emphasize boundaries and unify the composition
  • the result is good proportions that are not repetitive and rewarding visual exploration, the viewer finds more detail and relationships with time
  • excellent idea to use the exercise as a way to think through concepts and examples from lectures and readings

Notes for commandment

provide multiple examples for inspiration